Baadalon mein sona, kaisa lagta hoga?
Kya taare kuchh paas nazar aayenge?
Kya chaandani kuchh zyada thandi hogi?
Jheeni chaadar ka kona, kaisa lagta hoga?
Baadalon mein bhi,
Ret-se ghar bante-bigadte hain
Aur sooraj ka khilauna, kaisa lagta hoga?
Tanha se kuchh sur, gar mann udaas karte hon
Paani se bane narm takiyon mein
Muh chhupa ke rona, kaisa lagta hoga?
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14 comments:
wow.
Tanha se kuchh sur, gar mann udaas karte hon
Paani se bane narm takiyon mein
Muh chhupa ke rona, kaisa lagta hoga?
wow for the italicized words. Also :(
:(
thanks Ritz :)
but why the :(?
you wrote this? [:o]
yes. why? :-/
beautiful!
@Anon
thanks :)
u cud have let out ur name as well :)
sweet is sweet like the kid in the picture, like the dream she is dreaming, like the emotions behind this poem and like my keyboard lacking keys to express!
Are you as cute as the poem?? I think I have the answer :P
;)
@Baadal
thank u :)
@Jhappu
haan bhai :) shukriya.
vaise, tum yahan kaise?
u writing a sequel to this?
Amit, the ex-Anon
@Amit
no, does it appear like a movie? :)
Can't say about movies, but this deserves one :)
@Amit
thank u :)
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