[Insomniac Dreams]
you always had the words. now you've got the feelings, too
Waah! Vaaqaye ko fasaana banaane chaliJunoon-e-mohobbat,Gair ko aashanaa banane chaliRasm-e-deewanagi,Ek shakhs ko zamaana banaane chaliSeena-e-bismil,Tark-e-vafaa ko maut ka bahaanaa banane chali:D
@Rajaa few momentary feelings, may be!@JJwallah! lovely!but it gives a sacrificial undertone to the thing. 'contempt' is lost somewhere in between.
I know....its kinda crappy!! but still, given that I spent like 5 min. on that one....it aint all that bad :D!! btw, lovely little piece :)
NO! it's not crappy! I liked it!and thanks :-)
waah waah !!log toh sha se shaayari bhi karane lagee... woh bhi a se itani acchi !!
@Samthanks re :Daakhir bahan kiski hoon ;)
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you always had the words. now you've got the feelings, too
Waah! Vaaqaye ko fasaana banaane chali
Junoon-e-mohobbat,
Gair ko aashanaa banane chali
Rasm-e-deewanagi,
Ek shakhs ko zamaana banaane chali
Seena-e-bismil,
Tark-e-vafaa ko maut ka bahaanaa banane chali
:D
@Raja
a few momentary feelings, may be!
@JJ
wallah! lovely!
but it gives a sacrificial undertone to the thing. 'contempt' is lost somewhere in between.
I know....its kinda crappy!! but still, given that I spent like 5 min. on that one....it aint all that bad :D!!
btw, lovely little piece :)
NO! it's not crappy! I liked it!
and thanks :-)
waah waah !!
log toh sha se shaayari bhi karane lagee...
woh bhi a se itani acchi !!
@Sam
thanks re :D
aakhir bahan kiski hoon ;)
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