Sunday, June 22, 2008

Farishta

Intezaar hai, tumhara
Aao, aur ek baar saare ankahe lafz sun lo
Saari khwaahishon ko samajh lo,
Zinda kar do mujhe
Bejaan aankhein panaah chaahti hain,
Thak chuki hai zindagi,
Berukhe sannaton se
Chhoo kar apne haathon se meri ungliyon ko,
Jaan daal do badan mein
Sukoon do rooh ko
Kahan ho tum?
Intezaar hai, tumhara -
Lamha-lamha bujhti zindagi ko!
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13 comments:

jj said...

acchha hai!
par pata hai doosri baar padho to aisa lagta hai ki baat superficial reh gayi....matlab thoda jaldi likh diya!

Kanupriya said...

JJ,
jaldi to nahin, haan neend mein zaroor likha tha! =)
I don't usually read what I've written. Isko padha, aur laga nahin ki incomplete hain =P
Tum baat poori karne ki koshish karo!

....R.A.J.A.... said...
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jj said...

poori to hai hi sahi....bas shayad thode kam shabdon mein kahi jaa sakti thi...but as I said its pretty good as it is. Issi type ka kuch hai, padh lena:



तुम चली गई हो
लेकिन अपनी उगलियाँ इन हवाओं में भूल गई हो
ये बेवज़ह उलझा देतीं हैं मेरे बाल

फिर सुलझाने भी लगतीं हैं बडी नर्मी से
बस तुम्हारी ये उगलियाँ मेरे हाथों में नहीं आतीं

तुम आओ तो तुम्हारा हाथ थामूँ

Kanupriya said...

JJ,
arey bahut badhiya! :)

....R.A.J.A.... said...

Thanku :-)

and

Excellent. If I had any interest left in my own blog, I'd change the link to 'Sapna' with a link to this one.

Rajtilak Bhattacharjee said...

hi, was searching for gulazr saab ke namey...came across your site...i dont know who you are or what your name is...but what i want to do doesn't require these things...i want to thank you for such a beautiful site...thanks :)

Kanupriya said...

@Raja
Thanks :) tareef kuchh zyada ho gayi!

@Rajtilak
Thanks :)

....R.A.J.A.... said...

zyada kahan hui? I just said that I'd swap this poem for another of your poem! Both these poems have my feelings in your words.

Kanupriya said...

@Raja
would like to read ur feelings in ur own words. blogging dobara shuru karo! ;)

Phoenix said...

Zyada maang liya. Is duniya mein itha milta nahi.

Kanupriya said...

@Phoenix
milta hai shayad, haan tikta nahin!

kaunquest said...

liked this one too!

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