Sunday, April 08, 2007

Contempt

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Waah! Vaaqaye ko fasaana banaane chali
Rasm-e-deewanagi,
Ek shakhs ko zamaana banaane chali

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[Vaaqaya - Incident]

8 comments:

....R.A.J.A.... said...

you always had the words. now you've got the feelings, too

jj said...
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jj said...

Waah! Vaaqaye ko fasaana banaane chali
Junoon-e-mohobbat,
Gair ko aashanaa banane chali
Rasm-e-deewanagi,
Ek shakhs ko zamaana banaane chali
Seena-e-bismil,
Tark-e-vafaa ko maut ka bahaanaa banane chali

:D

Kanupriya said...

@Raja
a few momentary feelings, may be!

@JJ
wallah! lovely!
but it gives a sacrificial undertone to the thing. 'contempt' is lost somewhere in between.

jj said...

I know....its kinda crappy!! but still, given that I spent like 5 min. on that one....it aint all that bad :D!!

btw, lovely little piece :)

Kanupriya said...

NO! it's not crappy! I liked it!
and thanks :-)

Siege Perilous said...

waah waah !!
log toh sha se shaayari bhi karane lagee...
woh bhi a se itani acchi !!

Kanupriya said...

@Sam
thanks re :D
aakhir bahan kiski hoon ;)

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