you always had the words. now you've got the feelings, too
Waah! Vaaqaye ko fasaana banaane chaliJunoon-e-mohobbat,Gair ko aashanaa banane chaliRasm-e-deewanagi,Ek shakhs ko zamaana banaane chaliSeena-e-bismil,Tark-e-vafaa ko maut ka bahaanaa banane chali:D
@Rajaa few momentary feelings, may be!@JJwallah! lovely!but it gives a sacrificial undertone to the thing. 'contempt' is lost somewhere in between.
I know....its kinda crappy!! but still, given that I spent like 5 min. on that one....it aint all that bad :D!! btw, lovely little piece :)
NO! it's not crappy! I liked it!and thanks :-)
waah waah !!log toh sha se shaayari bhi karane lagee... woh bhi a se itani acchi !!
@Samthanks re :Daakhir bahan kiski hoon ;)
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