Saturday, November 18, 2006

Baadalon Mein Sona

Baadalon mein sona, kaisa lagta hoga?

Kya taare kuchh paas nazar aayenge?
Kya chaandani kuchh zyada thandi hogi?
Jheeni chaadar ka kona, kaisa lagta hoga?

Baadalon mein bhi,
Ret-se ghar bante-bigadte hain
Aur sooraj ka khilauna, kaisa lagta hoga?

Tanha se kuchh sur, gar mann udaas karte hon
Paani se bane narm takiyon mein
Muh chhupa ke rona, kaisa lagta hoga?

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15 comments:

Ritesh said...

wow.

Tanha se kuchh sur, gar mann udaas karte hon
Paani se bane narm takiyon mein
Muh chhupa ke rona, kaisa lagta hoga?

Ritesh said...

wow for the italicized words. Also :(

:(

Kanupriya said...

thanks Ritz :)

but why the :(?

....R.A.J.A.... said...

you wrote this? [:o]

Kanupriya said...

yes. why? :-/

Anonymous said...

beautiful!

Kanupriya said...

@Anon
thanks :)
u cud have let out ur name as well :)

baadal said...
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baadal said...

sweet is sweet like the kid in the picture, like the dream she is dreaming, like the emotions behind this poem and like my keyboard lacking keys to express!

Are you as cute as the poem?? I think I have the answer :P
;)

arundhati said...

had hai kanu didi,really u wrote it??? real good 10/10

Kanupriya said...

@Baadal
thank u :)

@Jhappu
haan bhai :) shukriya.
vaise, tum yahan kaise?

Amit Sinha said...

u writing a sequel to this?

Amit, the ex-Anon

Kanupriya said...

@Amit
no, does it appear like a movie? :)

Amit Sinha said...

Can't say about movies, but this deserves one :)

Kanupriya said...

@Amit
thank u :)

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